 PhoebeNprue4eva 2009-12-22 . chapter 22i love this story can't wait to find out what happens please update soon |
 SpeedDemon315 2009-11-27 . chapter 22Ah, another wonderful chapter! With some evil but always dashing Cole and Pheobe kicking a lecherous demon's arse thrown into the mix--two thumbs up, I say. I can imagine Cole going nuts if Maseras he saw him trying to hit on his wife. That would give Maseras a one-way ticket to the Wastelands and beyond.
And now, I must wait for whatever Cole has in that devious mind of his. Something ominious lurking about... *cues in suspence music* Looking forward to the next chapter!
~~SpeedDemon315 |
 Charmed4Life322 2009-11-18 . chapter 22Great Chapter...loved the Phoebe side of the story.I cant wait to find out what coles plans are and how being down there affect Phoebe more...Cole and Phoebe are the best,wish the show didn't break them up.But this story makes up for it.Keep It Up |
 FanficFemale 2009-11-18 . chapter 22I'm getting goosebumps already! I can't wait to find out what Cole has planned. I like how Paige seems to be the most rational one during this time, probably because she's not that close or deep in it.
Hope you update soon! I can't get enough of Evil Phoebe/Cole! |
 Another Phoebe 2009-11-18 . chapter 1 Another great chapter. I loved how Phoebe showed Maseras, who rules here (or there). I was nicely surprised with Piper´s intentions. And I loved Cole´s evil side. Now I´d love see more of his and Phoebe´s love. I´m not an easy rewiever to satisfy I know, sorry, but the show totally ruined Phoebe´s and Cole´s relationship and I need a replacement for that. P.S.Am I right, that Phoebe didn´t leave the BoS behind unintentionally? |
 lizardmomma 2009-11-18 . chapter 22very nice work. Paige was very astute with her observation. |
 Pholefan 2009-11-18 . chapter 22Great! I like it! Continue! |
 SpeedDemon315 2009-11-15 . chapter 21(I meant to review yesterday but fanfiction was having errors hence my first review was lost and I had to rewrite it all over again. Bah, I loathe it when that happens...)
My search for a well-written, amazing Cole/Phoebe fanfic hasn’t been all for naught! Your story is quite impressive, I love evil Cole and Phoebe—they make quite a devious couple.
Also, I love the shaded gray aspect you have going on here; like you, the whole black and white theme in Charmed bugged me too. If they understood that the proverbial line of good and evil gets blurred often, Cole might have not had such a hard time trying to prove himself consistently. But that’s just me…
And I’m glad to hear Cole and Phoebe will be together even till the very end, I can rest assured now! Although, if you do decide to make them have a kid and it is boy, I bet their son is going to be a real heartbreaker. XD
I am looking forward to the next chapter; this story is beautifully woven and finely crafted so keep up the awesome writing! You’re doing a swell job! |
 funluvr151 2009-11-14 . chapter 21awesome chapter |
 lizardmomma 2009-11-11 . chapter 21well done, I knew that it couldn't last with Cole and Pheobe living above ground. I know that this will be a big blow to Prue and Piper. |
 Charmed4Life322 2009-11-10 . chapter 21I loved the twist to the whole story, I was like wow and then sad that it ended I was like what, "No I have to know what happens next."Any ways major props to the story and excited fot the rest.!! |
 Shadow Cat17 2009-11-10 . chapter 21Intresting twist. |
 Another Phoebe 2009-11-10 . chapter 1 Wow, this chapter was ... awesome. I can´t find a word suiting enough. Cole´s dark side became visible again... I love this chapter. I can´t say anything more. P.S. I´m grateful, that you consider my reviews. |
 FanficFemale 2009-11-10 . chapter 21That's a major change alright. I wonder if being in the Underworld will effect Phoebe the same way it did before? I wonder how Piper and Prue will handle being blown off? I can't wait to get answers to these questions and more! |
 Another Phoebe 2009-11-08 . chapter 1 Another great chapter. I loved Prue´s, but also Cole´s reaction to the meeting. And about Phoebe´s pregnancy - I think, I can stick with it as far as you don´t make Phoebe and Cole just lovely parebts considern only about their offspring as it was e.g. in We´re meant to be. |