Great job. Not so sure about the solution to the heir problem, but I love the story anyway.

first of all, elves know no sickness, so there would be no infection or fever as far as legolas's wounds go. secondly, there is a bit of a problem as far as the whole gaggle of men bursting out of nowhere. wouldn't legolas have heard them from a ways off?

anyhow, i love the style of writing, and i encourage you to make even more pieces. keep up the good work!

Please keep writing as i could not go on if you didn't. please e'mail me, if you have the time, on your next update.

Kewl.

I kinda skipped a bit, but it was pretty good.

My story goes too fast...muu...

Oh well.

Blah.

Aw. So sweet.

Those guys are lucky I wasn't there to beat the crap out of 'em for hurting my Leggie.

as an avid fan of slash, i say: aw. great job.
but as a writer who must not ignore practicality and realism, even in fantasies, i say that the ending was too perfect. think: legolas had never kissed anyone before. if you were a virgin and when you arrived back HOME you found out that your LOVER fucked somebody and had a SON in YOUR palace that you were UNAWARE of, would you be as happy and satisfied as legolas? i don't think so. plus, i think elrond would be disapproving of the relationship and thranduil would be FURIOUS (he's basically the rotten old windbag among the elves of middle earth). this should be rated pg-13, it exhibits a lot of innuendo. besides all of that, your writing could use a bit of improvement-not that i'm complaining about a lack of action and dialogue. you're wonderful at that, but try to flesh out your characters a little bit. fanfic writers tend to focus too much on the character's physical looks when they should be describing their inner turmoil. write more also about settings-the beauty of rivendell and the coolness of mirkwood, the warm sun in legolas' face, reminding him of the peace and fiery passion he felt when he was with argorn, etc. the lush grass beneath aragorn's feet, just like the softness of legolas's touch. and his name means greenleaf. symbolism, symbolism, SYMBOLISM. that is the key. just try next time to not only concentrate on the romance but also on being a writer-plot and style are what make the perfect fanfiction. like have you ever read di's cruel intentions. that is the PERFECT fanfiction-plenty of slash, and it makes you literally cry. she took it down:(
besides those relatively small problems, the plot was excellent and the end was sweet. good job.

very good, except its spelled g-a-n-d-a-l-f. no "u", or did you do that on purpose?

Aw...So cute! . Glad it had a nice, happy ending too!
-*-Ammy

Uh...sorry to be pointing out so many mistakes, but the name Dunedan belongs to a race of people, Aragorn is ONE of the dunedan, but he is not THE dunedan. You might want to change that. Just thought that you should know.

Yeah, Aragorn changed his name, he became King Elessar...I think

YOu keep spelling The wizards name wrong, It's Gandalf not Gandulf.

thats the end? thats so short! sequal!

ooohhhh getting romantic wouldn't elrond be alarmed legolas was gay though?

dun dun dun lolz good story!