Oh my god, that was just so... beautiful.
And touching.
Yet again another blend of the elegant use of language and vivid descriptions. <3
I love the last line- it just seems like a perfect ending, adding onto the melancholy.

The sweet twinkling sounds of a wind chime... Haven't heard any recently, but I barely remember that wind song *relaxes*

Me, me, me! I like the sound of wind chimes too! :D I think they're just beautiful.

Oh, and thanks for remembering my birthday! :D Sorry this review came late, I was kinda busy, yep.

That's really awesome. It' so sad. I really like it, can't stay around for long because my eyes hurt. Man, my birthday is in a month..

Ah well, I remember when I was young I had a wind chime... but I can't remember much at all, except I got very pissed that the wind didn't blow XDD. Somehow, later, I lost it, so yeah >.>.

This fic sounds as if its thinking back into the past rather than an 'actual' story. Well, such fics do exist, and some of them are really good. However, for it to succeed, it might need to be longer. I would go into more precise details, but because you no longer write here... meh.

Oh yeah, I've been reading your stories quite a bit, and I just realised something you have that my story lacks. A beginning that connects to the end (I just realised it... after reading 10+ fics of yours... LOL).

Hey, this actually sounds like something I would have written on a bad day of mine (although I think I would concentrate more on the present). Wait... warmth (which is linked to fire)? That's almost a punchline of mine XDD. Lol.

Alright, I'm done here... but you could log on to MSN?