 Shizuku Tsukishima749 2009-08-10 . chapter 1Man, this was so beautiful!! Wow!
I loved the entire set-up, all of the instances where Aang noticed or wondered something about Toph and wished he knew the more/answer to it! So cute! ^U^
I loved the last one best, other than one and two. I've been meaning to write a fanfic based around what number two's subject, I just haven't gotten there yet. XD
The description in this was absolutely phenomenal, never mind it being exactly how the actual show would be! It was all so clear that I could picture absolutely everything! *U*
I LOVED this! Aang and Toph were FLAWLESSLY in character (especially for teenagers! lol.), and I loved EVERY SECOND of it! *U* *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :D ;) |
 Elsil 2009-08-09 . chapter 1It was cute. Taangy goodness. |
 The Last Firebender 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Simple and cute. I love it |
 have-a-cookie 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Aw, this is cute. I liked it a lot ^^ |
 Wohitzi 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Aah~! This is so sweet and cute. I love how you divided it into short little snippets - they're all wonderfully short and to the point, without feeling like something's being left out.
And the last part. Just... Gah. Beautiful.
On another note, the only reason I decided to read this was because the title was so bizarrely long. xD It's a summary in and of itself. |
 xyzisme 2009-08-07 . chapter 1I like this! |
 Anzer'ke 2009-08-07 . chapter 1No! You can't take this down.
It's excellent, and wonderful, and please don't remove it!
Seriously pretty good stuff XD
Peace out and Rock on,
Anzer'ke. |