aww

That is so sweet!
I hope there shall be a squel!

Aw! That was cute. Loved the ending...but wot will happen between them? who knows...
well, 10/10 for everything from me...cudos!

Ok I read this story like forever ago and i came upon it again and i was looking at the reviews and saw that i didnt write one so here it is:
Great story loved it it was touching. I liked reading it again. Meryy Christmas..Lol is like Sep and i read a X mas story but we still a good read.

THAT REALLY touch my soul!-!-!-!
And it almost make me cry the second time this day! ;)
Quite confusing at first, but it all gets cleared up in the end! A beautiful end I must say!^^
I'm really glad I read it,
^_^ amy85 ^_^

THE ENDO? U know I've read a lot of your stories and I always meant to put that I like your one shots... but this one needs just a tad bit more. *_*... well for me because I'm a sucker for romance, but other than that it was very well written.

Hi! coolkitty2 here! I loved the fic! It was so swet at the end! But I wished there was a little more sweet T/P moments! ^-^ Pleaz write more fics! Pleaz, ur really talented so, put it to good use! lol Gotta run! Bies! ^_~
-coolkitty2

I cried when I read this, but I'm not really sure why. There's something about it that appeals to something deeper in me... in all of us, I think. Nicely put.

^_^ didn't any one else vist trunks ever, what happends now that trunks knows that pan cares for him?

BRAVO! need i say more?

I loved this fic. There really should be a sequel. Ya know for closure purposes. Anyway sweet fic, but there should be more to it.

Wow!
Would you please write a sequel?
Pretty please!

do you have issues????? ja!!@!!

it was so good i printed it dont worry i put your name on it and you get credit you deserve!!! ja!!!

hey again ~
you know, your fics have a quality i cant pinpoint, but the way you go about crafting these fics...this one wasnt the usual heroine meets hero halfway and they say, 'i love you' and get married and pop out a few kids. this is a very comfortable fic and ends with a feeling of happiness on both parts. very, very deelish! please, write more. like, NOW.