Ba would do that to the pizza. I think it would of been funny if they did that in the show.


I loved how determined the team was to see Face. They werent going to let Stockwell or his Ables stop them from seeing Face.

Hi,
I enjoyed your story, I have just rediscovered the A Team thanks to dvd and I thought your story was very good but I am curious,in the summary you mentioned that your story was based on another story "The Shadow that Follows". I was wondering if you knew where I could read that one? Thanks if you can help.

Soulinlondon

I REALLY LOVED the story. One of the best MURDOCK stories I have read. I would love to read the story

PIZZA!
Glad Face is finally okay...not a bad story, actually. Might add it to my favorites.

IT'S ABOUT DANG TIME! What a great fic. I loved this from the beginning, especially since it was Murdock-centered. I wanted to see a resolution between Murdock and Hannibal, but I know how hard it can be to end a story, and you did that very well. BA's reaction was *perfect* Thanks for wrapping it up ^^) It was an awesome story,

jenben

Started great, ended great. I can't suggest any changes. One of my all time favorite A-Team fics!
Keep up the faboo work!

Hi,
I loved the story and was eager to read more. Your stories are enjoyable and I like the interactions between the characters but I have to say I found the ending to your story Counting Ten flat and not up to the level of the rest of the story. The reader was left hanging. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

MURDOCK was bothering NO ONE, SO WHY DID THEY MAKE HIM LEAVE FACEY'S ROOM? Why did that mean nurse call STOCKWELL? MURDOCK was causing no trouble. He just wanted to be with FACEY.He felt responsible for what happened. I wam with the other person, too much dialogue and names of people who are not really improtant to the story. I wthink it would have been been better if you had concentrated on what MURDOCK was sayihng to FACEY in his room when he was alone. HANNIBAL said MURDOCK had to work it out himself. Let the rest of us hear how he is doing that. Is he holding FACEY'S hand and telling him he is sorry he talked him into getting involved? Or is he just crying? What is he doing in the room while he is alone with FACEY?

This is terrific. I've really enjoyed reading it. Hope there's more to come.

I would have to say MURDOCK felt betrayed more than anything else. That was why he was so angry when he came to. He figured HANNIBAL to be the LAST person knock him out with a sedatve knowing how they affect him. Add to that the guilt he felt for FACE being injured no wonder he was still in one of when he woke up.I would love to read the story BTW GREAT STORY. READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN. ;)

Please continue this soon.

I want to know what happens next!

Hmmm. Sounds interesting. Are we going to see Hannibal soon?

Ooh. This is good. I just finished watching "Without Reservations" so my enjoyment of this story is being added to.

Looking forward to reading more.

Still just as engaging as when I last read it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapters!

Are you going to continue your story ? I'd like
to read more.
Thanks!