This was soooooo good... but Seifer and Squall died *cries* sooo sad... and Seph may be evil... but he is a cool villain and damn hot too o_O if there was only I guy in real life that looks like him, I would be stalking him! *laughs psychotically* ummm... anyway... bye byes! _

phew! never thought I'd be back? haha, I've been away from this story a long time, now I'm going to enjoy reading the rest later... right now, I need some sleep.

Friggin' brilliant! But you already knew that. _

I really like how the plot thickens. Sephiroth *drools* was a complete surprise to me, but it makes the story interesting and now vincent has joined. *drools again* anyways i can't wait to see what happens next. please hurry and put up the next chapter A.S.A.P Plz!

I like your story. it's interesting and well written.

and...

SWEARWORDS KICK ASS !

Awesomeeee Fic

As per your author's note at the end of the sixth chapter, yes it did get me curious. I've been reading this fic for a while, and i must say, I'm impressed. Can't wait for when we start seeing some action...*looks around* NO, not that kind of action. BTW, I am writing my own fic right now, and it will be completed soon. If anyone would be kind enough to add a few tips and pointers about the art of fanfiction (other than simply check your writing and spell check) in these reviews, I would be very pleased.

WHATS HAPPENING? WHATS HAPPENING? PLEASE TELL ME WHATS HAPPENING! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE hurry up and write the next chapter PLEAAAAAAAAAASE! (i think i've made my point)

YEAH! *does happy dance* another chapter to enhance my growing addiction ;). I like your work and can't wait for the next chapter - and it looks like more FF7 characters are finally appearing...

I love your story! Ky is sooo cool! You absolutely have to post the next chapter ASAP!

The Almighty Kitsune

AKA The Shi no Kami

Wow! This is pretty good. Now I don't claim to be an expert on Final Fantasy 8, but you've really captured that world. Yes it's long, it took me an hour to read it all, but damn is it good. It's interesting how you picked two men who hated each other so much to actually live and raise a daughter together. Nonetheless, it's really great. And the "group" I guess you could call them isn't all that close either. I've read a bunh of FF8 fics, and everybody's still friends with each other, but this story took a twist in that concept of friendship. Great story. Write some more! It's great!

Finally Cloud is in it! I really like this tory and hope that the next chapter will be up soon (hint hint ;). Oh BTW, does the red eyes mean that Kyrie is a decendant of Vincent?

Love it so far! teeeheee! seiferXSquall so cute together!

kewl! What can I say?

Bloody good story, keep writing more!

OOoooh write more soon!