Great poem, it's 'angsty' and romantic- two of my favorite genres :)

Very nice. The lines 'The pain of loss and hope as well, has put her in a tragic spell. From her loss she will gain, something ten times greater than her pain.' really struck me. Very good rhyme scheme and very succinct as well. :)

Very nice!

It's cool if you read 'tear' as the thing that happens when they blow something up. (grins)

Very good. I'm a little confused at the subject but i liked it. I liked it a lot!