Well, seems time for there to be a full on review. I know this is a short one shot, but that's just my way.

Well, firstly, I like the idea. And I'm a huge fan of 'what happened later on?'. It is cute that they wrote poetry, and seems pretty in character.

The thing is, the poems, while meaningful... well, they are awful. Which to me worked well. You know, because the one is thespian and the other is a manga artist. I suspect they like expressing themselves creatively, but poetry probably isn't a strong suit.

The thing is this; I'd have loved them realize that the poems were awful. They'd still love them, of course. They would have a good laugh at how dorky they were, and how cute it was they came up with the same bad idea. That's my thought.

This story is very sweet and I don't mind it being this short...it's perfect.

Kind of cute.

I absolutely loved this!

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awwww! so sweet!

Want more. D

sweet! i loved it!

thats so cute )

i think the poems culd have had a little more work but its still rly good and sweet _

really really cute! loved it.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwz!

It's always nice to read something like this. Great job; I liked your poetry.

That was so sweet.

awe that was so sweet

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