OKAY, so this was SO CUTE! i love the idea of Sokka being lead around in the dark by Toph. it is so sweet. love lovelovelovelovelove

LOL XD love that last line. very cute! you've captured Toph fairly well. good job! :D

Freaking awesome ending!

Geez, he only just figured out then that he was missing something??
Great descriptions, especially when Toph was feeling Sokka's face, the whole thing was incredibly detailed. Nice job.

Daw. :3 :3 Maybe you are annoyed that it's unedited and that you thought it was obvious and blah blah blah, but honestly, I love this! A lovely little treat before I go to bed.

Seriously. Everything is spot-on here. And there really weren't any major, distracting errors. I loved her "viewing" of Sokka and how they both reacted - it was terribly amusing and also (weirdly) kind of touching (no pun intended). Like...I dunno. It was perfect for the age and maturity level they were at.

I'm not into Avatar - which you know - but I seriously think you nailed this one on the head. Totally love it.

Thanks for sharing, darling! & God bless Tokka week for making you write, for once.

Cheers!
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Love always,
Zay