Awww it was all a story in a story. I was hoping little adorable innocent Squee finally caught a break.

But it seems(to me at least) little Squeegee had a psycic vision type thing of his future. *falls to knees and shouts at every known deity, holy or not* LET IT BE SO!

XD

Shadow

amazing, is this story complete?

I must say this was very cute! and I made so many sqeeky noises when I read this. Devi "mom" and Johnny "dad" seemed like such cute titles! X3 any who again I loved the story and the plot...though I wish it wasn't a dream for Squeegee, his life seems better if it was Devi taking care of him.

Nice Ending

i lovedd it

interesting

the story was amazine and very creative but its really sad how it ends you should probebly make more storys with johnny, squee,devi and a bunch of other carecters from jthm.

... that. was. AMAZING! sequel? prob'ly not, but it's just an idea.

um, this time-skip thing was confusing. or maybe there wasnt a skip, and i just wasn't paying attention? love how you write for nny, btw!

OH! THE ENDING WAS SO CUTE! i like how nny was talking in the beginning. keep going and going and going!

This story is amazing! The ending made me happy! :D

Oh... my... god. I am... speechless. Hopefully this spot on my faves will be enough. Best JTHM fic I've ever read.

-Audrey

wow, so the whole thing was a dream?

aww, ppoor todd, the way it ended was sad. /

but i like it. :)

I once read this story ages ago. On Over the Stars, I believe. I loved it then and I loved it now and I'm very happy to have found you on ff. Your other stories look promising. You'll probably hear from me again!

Keep up the good work.

Prophetic dream?

I hope it is. It seemed an improvement.

...April 17th is my birthday, too!

Anyway, it was really cute. Nice ending too.

Um, maybe you can put spaces between the sentences. Easier on the eyes, y'know.

The end.