I'm quite enjoying this on-going story. Your writing style is unique and very intriguing - very nice, indeed. Keep 'em coming! Loving it!

~LL

A brilliant sequel. Your imagery is amazing - I could actually *see* this happening. And of course, your characterisation is bang on the nail. Love the sense of hope at the end.

that was really good and definately a different story to read than usual. Thank you for ending it with hope. i was worried lois was going to die each time clark went away and then he would be alone. it was sad but there was still hope for them.

its a new start

That was extremely sad, but really well written. Great Job!
-Lavenderlily12