In addition to seeing them written intelligently, I do so love to see the villains get the upper hand. After all, they *do* have to be fairly smart in order to get their schemes working.

The heroes are just ridiculously lucky, that's all.

woow! man please update soon! It's like F**king awesome

hahahahahahahahha
this is really very original and I adore the fairy rescue,
although I DO hope someone unpoisons the turtle :-)

great OC's and the banter is awesome

this is definately a chapter woth a few snickerdoodle cookies.

they are basically sugar cookies with swirls of cinnimon and sometimes nuts

I made you six HUGS update soon Irual

I'm so amused by all these pompous rules of engagement. And the smigreer returns!

Really, Emeny? A bobcat? She truly is a "disgrace to the forces of Evil."

And once again, the day is saved thanks to... no, not the Powerpuff Girls. It's the Three Old Biddies! (Seriously, Phil, useless man).

Oh yes, cobras are indeed quite - ahem! - versatile...

Oh Emeny, as Scar once said, "Just listen to teacher!" Course, she already seems to be doing well, endangering everyone's lives like that. And oh! That line - “Being a princess is a horrible mental condition" - were truer words spoken?

I loved chapter six! Having the women doing the rescuing was genius! Everyone knows women have to get men out of their scrapes all the time. lol :)

(Formerly known as Tongue of the Viper)
Hey shut up Jafar! A bobcat is a very menacing creature. I mean... IN CAN SHED ON YOU, CAN'T IT?
lol, possibly my favorite chapter so far! ;D

this sis awesome and I love how you make being an evil villain a sort of born into carreer path

I love how the waitress is like a jr wanna be villainess and how you portra Jafar and Mal.

this has to be one of the cleverest and neatest plot twists I have read great job.

ALso I adore their critique of Eme

please update soon.

Irual

This is really original ^^ i like it. and i like how your OC isn't a mary sue

And down goes the turtle! Bwahahahaha!
If I know anything about disney villains, they're going to leave Emeny there to drown.
I love the dialogue, It made me laugh a lot (again, just came home from school). Great job!

roflol

I really am enjoying this

snow white's prince is the more concervative of the pair isnt he? and cinderella's prince is the other one right?

the scene at the end is great too
I am guessing that Emeny is going to be a great match for waitressing on the vilains HA!

and I like that charming 2 is actually more of a thinker than charming 1

I like the idea of evil love ( and a smidgen ofgood abounding in Jafar and Mal) you are such a good plot twist idea person

I am really enjoying this
I am sorry it has taken me a few days to review but real life calls with it's siren song of work LOL

great update have a bag of Jelly Belly jelly beans to sustain your muse and please update soon Irual

Dun dun dun! I think I know a few people like Emeny, lol
As always, a brillaint chapter, that did not cease to make me laugh. That is doubly impressive because I just got back from my second day of highschool.

Awesome chapter!

rofl, I'm going to teach my friend to smigreer.
Also, I love your ending. I nearly cried when I read it. Keep up the good work!

awsome...i can just picture the carnage and chaos that will more or less happen within the next chapter good job