really lovely! :} it was so sweet. you did great for this story.

I agree with alligatorpen. I have read some bad stories here, but this one? it is one of the top three worst I have ever read. Not only is the plot terrible, but it almost seems like a 6 year old wrote it!. So many missing words, incomplete sentences, no punctuation. Just, it is so bad!.

Also aren't Racer X and Speed brothers in the movie?

OMG... worst story i have ever read. you lack the use of punctuation, spelling, and grammar. there are even parts where you completely forget important words. but even if the story was written well the entire plot is shit.