Wow! Don't ask me why, but this one shot touched me and I am not a big fan of Naraku. LOL .'

I really like this story. It seems to show a sort of Father/Daghter moment between Naraku and Kanna, which are some of my favorite fanfic types, like Sessomaru and Rin. Real cute as well as well writen, you should be proud of yourself on this master peice. I love how you kept Naraku's charector qhile still makeing him more then a pure monster only concerned with world dommination and controling his reincarnations. I belive that ( if you wanted to ) you could make this as like a series of one-shots concerning Kanna and Naraku in Father/Daghter moments, only a suggestion but i belive you could do it. I just love that this is a story concerning Kanna as she is one of my favorite charectors, and again, love your story you did a jam-slam good job.

AW! So CUTE! I love this!

Great story :D