So, er, Lina married Xellos in this one? Interesting, one wonders how a Mazoku can breed given that they don't use sex. Hm, you could work some realyy dark incubus/Succubus stuff into this...

And I believe Luna is 4 years older than Lina...

It will be interesting to see if this story ever comes to be published.

wow can't wait for the story!

xan

i think fillia's said to be around 400 and not 200. and shouldn't the inverse/mettalium kids have purple red hair not purple blond? i can't wait for the story though.. should be interesting _

This has a promising start! Please write more! I have to know what your planning to do to all of them!

does is liana inverse lina and xelloss's daughter?