Great story! You must update, it was just starting to get good!

I like it keep it up

Really love this!
Please update!

this is a pretty good story so far. i love the movie Major Payne and your character seems pretty realistic with her behavior. i also like how you wrote the guys on the squad not liking her right away and the pranks. i really hope you continue this story

I've just found this story and I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as possible. Please!

OMG. this is really good. I can't wait to read more. :)

Love your story, wil there be an insight into Alex's step-father situation as well?

This is the best of all the Major Payne Fanfictions. Not to name names but one of the others kind of scared me. Lol. Please write more, it would be a shame to stop writing now. I like the way you stayed true to the characters, keep it up! Hope to read more soon!

:) Haven't come along a good read for quite some time :) Hope to read more soon :) SC

I enjoyed this story very much and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Awww... It's so cute! I like how you tap into a girl's consciousness to find a simple fear that keeps the story going. Sorry if that makes no sense!

Im in love with your story. love tori's attitude,she the perfect mix of sweet and tough. great job so far, hope you keep writing the story

This is really good. You should try to continue it. I would definately like to see more of this story.

Aww luvs it!

hope you plan on updating soon

awwwwwww i lurved it cant wait to seee how threr date is going to be