Ooh! Love it. I think the first chapter is my favourite...or maybe the second...

Lovely :)

Perfect Jean

I just discovered these chapters and really love them! :) I hope you write more some day :)

"disgustingly perfect" - brilliant! I'm a big fan of your stories, please keep them coming.

I love BallyK fanfics, and unfortunately there just arent any new ones anymore. i was so excited to see you had updated your story. i love your moments, and i absolutely loved this latest one. Really close to character and really lovely. Please write more soon :)

Oh, I loved it! I always find it so difficult to imagine how Assumpta would be if she were happy and in love, because we never got to see that side of her, but you wrote it beautifully.

Phil

Beautiful, heartbreaking, thankyou. Xx

So happy to see another chapter, no matter how short. I especially like how this one ends! Thank you once again for your wonderful writing.

Oh, I love Peter and Assumpta happy endings, and I love them even more when you write them. The comparisson style is something completely new too, which just makes it even more special. Thank you again for keeping this stuff going. x

Oh I love it! Thank you very much for sharing it.

I love the symbolism theme and the description of it all. I can really imaging Peter thinking like that.

Well done!

I just came back to read a few of my favorite stories again. After a year, "Moments" still touches me deeply. It's very well written and thought-provoking. Any chance of more chapters?

As old as this story is, it's still amazing!

The point of having hope where, quite possibly, nothing else will ever exist.

Very true.

We would all rather face hope, even just a tiny amount, and the dreams that come with it than the dead end that is knowing nothing will ever come.

Very good but more please...appreciate the writing and theme.

Hi g,

I really enjoyed this.

Using the anaolgy of a chess game was clever!

Nice, simple, thought provoking. Hope is a funny thing-you want your hopes to be realized, but having hope is better than finding out they can never be real. I like it!