|Reviews for I Miss You|
| xoxoS.A.M 8/21/09 . chapter 1
that was beautiful. this was written beautifully and you must have quite a talent if you wrote this! i'm excited to read more of your work. great, great story, this one!
| Ron'sBella 8/7/09 . chapter 1
aw. Really sad! Well done
| Kalina Willow Manus 8/7/09 . chapter 1
Perfect, change nothing.
| ShakNali 8/7/09 . chapter 1
I thiought this was good. I liked how you interspersed the song with the story.
Two small corrections: It should be "laid", not "layed" in the places where you have that. And I think you meant to say that Fred's life had been "extinguished" rather than "distinguished".
Hope you write more!