Huzzah, 100th reviewer!

...Oh, this is the part where I say something worth while, right?

Well, for starters; great story! And I do agree with you, I believe this story is better than "Me and My Gangster". Both were good, but...I'm more fond of this one. (Biased, much?) Also, this was really humorous, dramatic, and, at the same time, really touching. I loved the last line; it was a really good finish!

If I had any critiques, it would be that Sasuke and Sakura seem to be a tad...out of character; though, just a smidge! (I'm not trying to be a jerk here, I swear! DX ) I don't believe that Sakura would be so...ridiculous, at times, and Sasuke seems to be a bit...overly affectionate? But, this is an AU story, so I suppose it would make sense. However, I did think the way that you portrayed Sakura's insecurities over Sasuke not loving her was rather realistic.

But, of course, this is a humor fic; so I'm probably reading too much into it and just over-analyzing.

Nonetheless, a great story by a great author! ;)

Great story, very humorous!

this is just soo sweet and makes me wonder why won't you just make this chicago thigy be multi-chapter or sumthin..

Another sequel? You are fantastic! I would like to say some more, but I hate repeating myself; it makes it seem less reliable... Oh well; keep up the good work! :D

Lulz, I just realized this is a part of a one-shot series :) I'm very happy it has indeed been continued. As for my last review, ignore it please. This is a very humorous series and I do hope you continue (that much remains the same) past the latest Chicago! one-shot.

This is a great one-shot! I wish you'd continue it, but is still makes a kick-a** oneshot. I love Sakura's character in this and Sasuke's as well. Though the character building could be considered as rushed, I think it went together beautifully. Thank you for posting it! :D

HAHAHAHA OH MY GOSH HOW FUNNY! LOL

I wonder if you posted up another one yet?

I want to see them married?

or worse...Sakura meets the parents :O

I probably shouldn't say this but I actually thought this was hilarious. I think it's Sakura's inner thoughts. Nonetheless, great fic. Regardless of the fact this was an older fic of yours. I quite like gangster! Sasuke. ;D

I read that part about Sasuke and the pot and spoon. You know what came to mind? This—"Sasuke clutched the wooden cooking utensil in his hand, glaring at the pot as if to say, '/DEFYYY ME!/'"

And then that part about Sasuke coming to the door. That was when an image of Sasuke wearing a "Kiss The Cook" apron, brandishing a spoon as he bareled in, shouting, "IF YOU HURT MY SAKURA, IMMA BEAT YOU WITH A SPOON!"

Personally, I think she's just doing it so Naruto doesn't get stressed out or something—I mean, his best friend is trying to kill everyone—because Sakura is just that selfless. I heard that MK (because I SERIOUSLY cannot spell his name to save my life [although, if it was the Naruto!verse I was saving, I could find a way]) is pro-SasuSaku.

Amazing story by the way. I was laughing throughout it all (my mom was wearing the famous are-you-crazy look all parents have). This was wonderful to read.

I read that part about Sasuke and the pot and spoon. You know what came to mind? This—"Sasuke clutched the wooden cooking utensil in his hand, glaring at the pot as if to say, '/DEFYYY ME!/'"

And then that part about Sasuke coming to the door. That was when an image of Sasuke wearing a "Kiss The Cook" apron, brandishing a spoon as he bareled in, shouting, "IF YOU HURT MY SAKURA, IMMA BEAT YOU WITH A SPOON!"

Personally, I think she's just doing it so Naruto doesn't get stressed out or something—I mean, his best friend is trying to kill everyone—because Sakura is just that selfless. I heard that MK (because I SERIOUSLY cannot spell his name to save my life [although, if it was the Naruto!verse I was saving, I could find a way]) is pro-SasuSaku.

Amazing story by the way. I was laughing throughout it all (my mom was wearing the famous are-you-crazy look all parents have). This was wonderful to read.

Lol so cool. She beat up a gangster xD. I like how things are going :)

lolol, ADORABLE! I LUVE IT! xoxo sasusaku 4eva!

Dude, i love this fanfic it was so funnnny (:

i like it

i love it

i cant wait for a sequel!

pleeaassseee

omg! u hav 2 write mor lol! this is so funny! i luv it! iv read all of th chicago stories n hav been crakin up! please write mor!