Hell Yeah, Luna, beat the shit out of here.

Oh yeah! Awesomeness! I am a TOTAL fan of you now!

Darn, luna has sure been fired up. I just hope she soon realizes what she's getting herself into.

Isn't 666 the Devil's number?

You made a mistake in this story. "Yes, but you're his best friend, and the first person he told about being Mega Man." First one she told about Mega Man? Did you forget about Sonia?

The story is starting out good, but you already lost points with the GeoXLuna pairing. Don't get mad, I've read other fanfics with pairings I don't agree with, I can look past it if the story is good enough. But seriously, Geo and Luna? The only Geo and Luna I want together is the earth and moon. Get it? Luna is the name of the earth's moon and Geo refers to the earth...oh come on! That was funny!

Similarities to the original MegaMan StarForce: 1. The main charater is depressed because someone special to them left. 2. The Wizard leaves because he didn't want to make their former parter feel worst. 3. The Wizard come back to save their partner, reguardless of the past.

This is just like when Cygnus told Geo that Omega-Xis killed Kelvin (in the anime)! Although, Cygnus was lying.

WHOA, WHAT A TWIST! X-D

When it said blue hair, I thought it meant Queen from MMSF3, not Sonia.

What happened to Luna's Wizard, Vogue?

I thought Luna was 15 years old.

Wow sis. Talk about a girl stepping up to the plate! I think she is my favorite character. Well so far...if not Pat.

Nice first chapter! It's really gripping and pulls you in, it shows the relationship that the two have and how deeply they care for each other very nicely. A small bit of criticism I guess and that's that I find it a little hard to believe that kids that are about eleven can be that lovey dovey but then agin I haven't seen that kind of relationship before so I can't speak completely from experience. I just imagine that kids are a little more kid like, not really kissing and all I mean (that again may just be inexperience of those situations) but a nice beginning to this story and I'm really curious to read more.

i must say, I really like this and how you portraid the four guardians, however, I was reluctant to read this at first becasue i'm not a fan of Luna (not even after reading this) but the story overall was good, i'll continue to the sequel :) :)