Haven't got a chance to read and review in sometime, anyway this and the past few chapters have been really good. Xerox apparently feels something for Luna at least at the end of 10 he seems to. Now we finally see the rest of the group, who are now going to help in tronceing Fairy Leviathan (Her name in the Zero series for those who don't know). Should be a interesting fight.
Of course Bud wasn't too happy about Luna taking Geo's place as protector and hero. Believeing it will lead to self detruction or getting herself killed I should say.
Well now Fenrir is going to start trouble and is someone who enjoys a good fight. Once again Bud and Pat (and Rey) are their too killing butt, weather or not Ace and Acid will be there depens on if a mega snack isn't distracting him (Ace of course).
Really enjoying the story, I see nothing wrong and neither do I have anything to compain about, (not exactly a master at grammar after all).
Poor Bud. (And Zack too, I guess.) Luna's changed a lot over the past four years, and yet he can't help but treat her like he did when they were kids...
Heh, Harpuia's sure right about women. " You get the characterization of the characters perfect. I really liked when Bud was explaining to Luna about what Geo would want. So true...
Anyway, as amazing as always! I can't wait to read more!
...Dang I love this story so much. XD Anyway, I love how things are getting more intense, and the parts with Luna and Geo were so cute. I can't wait to read more!
Really good story so far, first thing first, I find it kind of funny how Luna became Zero since it reminds me back in 1993, when X1 came out everyone mistook him for a girl upon first appearance unless they read Cain's Journal in the manual. Also it's cool to see the four gurdians too as EM Wave beings, I can kind of guess who their master is but I'm still not 100% sure since it up and change. Keep it up I'm eager to see what Bud has to say to Luna about being the new hero.
I like this story a lot and think the plot is awesome, but some things strike me as odd-it could be partially because Star Force is the only Mega Man game I've played besides Marvel vs. Capcom and unlocking Roll :P
But yes, one thing I noticed is how the only name picked was "Zero". I figured you based Luna's transformation off the Zero from the old games (which I only know because he is my boyfriend's favorite character). It's not too bad, but all the characters in the game have part or the whole name of the FMian/Amian/Whatever (Minus Harp Note because Harp's name was changed to Lyra-but it is Lyra Note in the Anime), so I think it's weird that it's just "Zero" as it doesn't fit in with any of the others. Similarly, the transcode number is...odd. I'm not sure your reasoning for picking that one, but even with most of WAZA being able to Wave Change, it still seems an odd number to pick.
Similarly, I noticed Misora/Sonia hasn't been mentioned at all and while I can't stand her, part of the issue that your story doesn't fit as well into canon as it could is because she's not mentioned. It was shown she became friends with the other group and it was obvious she had feelings for Geo too, so it seems odd she hasn't been mentioned-I mean, you could still be meaning to mention her at a later time, but yeah.
Just a few tidbits to mention Shall look forward to the other chapters though, as like I said, the plot is really interesting.
Yay! One of my favorite Mega Man characters is now another of my favorite characters!
And Pat and Rey are back too! This is really an amazing fic, I'm sorry I'm not able to say much more... I just really love everything about it, even the little things like Pat's new outfit and Bud working with Aaron and Kelvin. So, yup. You do an amazing job, and I really look forwards to more!
Oh, this is awesome! I love it so far! Sorry I'm not going into more detail, but when I really like something I get at somewhat of a loss for words. Anyway, this is totally amazing so far, and it looks like there'll be a lot of great stuff coming up. Awesome job!