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idol269 2/25/12 . chapter 3
Lol, they're both more concerned about winning the game than about being with each other...don't they know that if one of them would "lose" that they would both win in bed? :)
X-Ray Hearing 2/24/12 . chapter 1
So let me get this straight...Ron brought up marriage to Hermione and she blew him off, only to go all bitchy at him later when he wouldn't propose again? Lol, what a psycho!

And Ginny was just as bitchy as ever in this chapter...I love how she is completly incapable of thinking that Hermione could have done anything wrong with the current situation.
Vj86 4/15/11 . chapter 6
LOOOOOVEEE the one shot chapters... daddy Ron... truly love him sniff sniff... u have a marvelous narrating skills and a way with words... Cheers..
idol269 9/18/10 . chapter 6
Your A/N is spot on. I really enjoyed this whole story. Once the couple stopped trying to hide their weaknesses from each other they were really strong together.
idol269 9/18/10 . chapter 1
I like the way this chapter ended. Hermione finally decided to act like a grown-up and go after what she wants instead of complaining when it's not handed to her.
melove167 8/30/10 . chapter 6
loved this series! loved it!
thlove 3/31/10 . chapter 1
I really loved your story, but especially the end. I love the picture you paint of their lives. No one does enough of that. I'm such a sap, but I love it. Thank you! It made my day!
Melo89 12/14/09 . chapter 3
Caloundra is on the east coast of Australia, not the southern coast
SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl 9/3/09 . chapter 6
Yes daddy Ron is adorable and so touching. I was surprised though. I thought it would be Hugo not Albus. But very nice twist; I think it made the fic even better. Thanks for making such a great collection.
SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl 9/3/09 . chapter 5
Aw great chapter. This somehow was really easy to imagine. It just fit the couple so well. I really loved it. And I think it was greater because it was short. Sweet and simple. :D
stephers1234 8/29/09 . chapter 6
as before, i love it. so glad you continued the story.
justawritier 8/28/09 . chapter 6
very cute! Daddy Ron is adorable. I really enjoyed this story :)
justawritier 8/27/09 . chapter 5
loved it. I really like the diffrient style of writing.
justawritier 8/27/09 . chapter 4
great chapter. Loved the last line lmao!
justawritier 8/27/09 . chapter 3
That was great. I loved them both trying to get the other one to crack first.
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