Made me smile! Thanks! _

shallow, but then, this is a comedy so it's forgivable. and everybody had the same "voice". no one was in character, but the exposition sort of made up for it. 3 out of 5. not bad. keep writing!

Two words: Bloody lovely!

"I live with a passel of idiots." This one had me cackling. _ Kudos to Sanzo and Goku for being the smart ones. _

Two Thumbs WAYWAYWAY up! Although I'm not to sure about the whole, GAY Thing... I liked it! Nods, Good job!

i luv the fluff or wateva u call it! it's juz so cute!

good shot!

Hehe! Cutie fic! -

*Shumea*

Cute fic. Undoubtly, Sanzo's POV is the nicest

I *loved* this! It sounds so much like them. I was laughing and gasping all throughout, especially towards the end. It's a great story.

Did you ever do the one where Sanzou and Goku finally say the words right out loud? _

awwwwwwww! this was cute! terribly OOC, of course, but oh so cute! more? onegai? with lemon? _

I just love that line about throwing him a sleepy smile. My heart melted, literally. And of course that sly old Gojyo putting his finger on Hakkai's lip, I was totally cheering him on. You gotta love the hakkai/gojyo. please, write more

That was a really sweet fic! How cute! That definitely has to be my favorite Gojyo/Hakkai fic I've read. :)

_ That was a wonderful, fluffy, utterly fantastic story! Loved the way you played out the characters and used differnt POVs! _ Very humorous, especially liked the part with Sanzo and his fan! :D Love the fan. Great ending, very romantic, just can't get any better! o_O; Can it? _V

Oh, that was a wonderful story. You've captured their characters and their inner conflicts really well. The narrative voices you gave to each brought out so much more of the story. I really enjoyed it. Great work! _