 SnowyReverie 2010-01-07 . chapter 2A reveiw, XD Not a bad chappie, cute though. Update as soon as you think of something good for chapter 3. |
 Archer Princess 2009-10-08 . chapter 2Aww, this story is so kawaii! X3 I've recently been really into SyncxAnise lately, and this story has just fueled my fangirlism. Please, continue! I'm anxious for the next chapter to be posted! |
 Kaida Rita 2009-09-24 . chapter 2plz update soon |
 ? 2009-09-20 . chapter 2 Yay! You updated! Anise and Sync like each other actually they just won't admit it (evil grin)
Take your time writing the next one if you're busy with school :)
Good luck! |
 SyncxArietta 2009-09-20 . chapter 2Hehe, cute.
I like the lady.
And don't worry, I think they're pretty in character :)
Good job, and I completely understand the zombie thing. Though, I don't have to do it anymore! xD Good luck!
Hopefully, you find time and get through your part that you're stuck on! :)
Look forward to reading part three! |
 Pandaren-storyteller 2009-09-19 . chapter 2Yo, glad to see an author alive and well!
You know, You can always boost that 3-shot to a 4-shot (=D?? Not a bad idea to extend it a bit more just to fill in whatever you need to.
Anyways, great chapter xD! Aren't some chases for the good guys often end in circles? (not to mention in terrible luck with obstacles lol xD)! Well, either way glad for the update and thanks for that!
WOHHOO!! I think I'm the first reviewer!
Well, if your still aimed in making that 3-shot fic then I should suggest taking more time, perhaps a month or two more, and really think it through. Close up whatever plot holes your missing and end the final chapter with something that all readers will find both entertaining and enjoyable to read it. Make it so that they would want a sequel or something, lol ^^!
I also vote for a 10k words if you can manage that (and if its that long then I'm sure that you'll be able to fix whatever your having trouble with ^^)! That's all my tip for you and I hope that you can update soon; preferably when your fully confident that its properly fixed (grammar, spelling, and whatnot patched up) (=3 take your time the most!! SOme readers will beg for your story to be update asap, but for the sake of quality I think you should work ** it (not that you've already worked hard so far x3)
Well, I bid thee farewell thyne fellow author!
P.S. I apologize for the large reviews so far -__-; |
 SyncxArietta 2009-09-08 . chapter 1lol, this was good.
I like it. Anise is perfect, aha.
And I agree, there aren't enough Sync/Anise pairings out there.
Thanks for writing this :)
Looking forward to chapter 2! |
 ? 2009-08-20 . chapter 1 Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Please continue!!
SyncAnise FOREVER! |
 Mika Naaman 2009-08-16 . chapter 1 Yay! SyncXAnise ^o^ I love your SynAni fanfics, they're so good. It was really interesting and really fun to read, I can't wait until the other two come out ^^! |
 Pandaren-storyteller 2009-08-14 . chapter 1"…… It’s so fun making Sync and Anise fight~ cB"
To qoute that.. I have to agree with you on that. Its pretty amusing to read about Sync and Anise's interactions with one another xD!! Anyways glad that this pairing in stories isn't dead. So thats a plus ^^! So far this 3-shot fic (if I'm correct) is something I'm looking forawrd to reading. And you like to tease dont, yah? (=/ Yes! I want the next chapter so I hope you can get up soon!
Now as for editing and what I think of this fic... Like the previous fic made by your friend, this is certianly very interesting. Its fluid in a way and very easy to read most of it. There were just a couple sentences/segments of the story that I needed to read a few times to understand, but it was overall nicely done. As far as Vocab and grammar goes... well, you sure beat me on that, hands down =_= (you and your friend both lol)
To be honest... if this wasn't a 3-shot fic, I would give my opinion of extending-- or perhaps changing this into a full series (long chapters and long story)Thats just my suggestion tho. Anywho I look forward to your upcoming chapter and I hope that despite the lack of reviews you get, you can still continue.
P.S. That pic in your profile... was that made by you =O? If so you should make a doujinshi off of this (T-rated of course). Based on the description and dialogue between characters... you can create at least 4-6 pages as a start. Panels per page would most likely range from 6-9 depending on the lay-out and the action that Anise and Sync are doing. Plot wise is pretty simple and it'll be just about a long one-shot doujinshi (if the upcoming chapters are longer and have more scenery/action/talking and whatnot then the pages will probably range up to 70 pages ^^).Oh, this can certainly be doujinshi material XD!
Ah... I've gone to manga-making-mode -_- sorry!
Anyways I hope to see the new chappy soon! laters!
P.S.S. As for making an Anise x Sync fic... that'll be soon... I think! |
 Hiroen Nnir 2009-08-10 . chapter 1Very cute, can't wait to see what happens next. |
 Sakura Moon 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Hehe, so even the great Sync is fearful of Legretta. Love the way how Anie allowed the thief to steal her stuff and Sync's remarks on that. I can't wait for the next chapters! |