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DREAMLYN-LA-DY-BUG-
2009-12-05 . chapter 32
Wahh! u were in a car accident! r u okay!?? hope u get well! :)
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 15
AH!
POR
MIKAN-CHAN!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 14
I love the last part!

-She turned to look at me, her mask had fallen off, but she had the same face as the day spent at Central Town. Her red-brown eyes were filled with extreme pain, her hair messed was messed up slightly and a few strands had fallen in her face. She smiled a small pain filled smile, and a trickle of blood slid out of her mouth and down her chin, dripping on to the sword, adding to the blood covering it. She mouthed three words to me, "I love you." My eyes widened.

Time resumed.

The swords man yanked the sword back out of her, making her cough blood. He rushed at me, but fell over as a large spike made out of ice was stabbed through his chest. Hell's Angel was standing behind him, her eyes glazed over with pain. She collapsed.

The few left guards rushed at her, pinning her down.

I wanted to help her, but I was enveloped in a bright white light once again, and was transported back to GA. The last thing I saw of her was her eyes flashing from a red-brown color, to a familiar hazel.

'Mikan...'

I was back at the Academy.

"MIKAN!" I yelled. My voice was filled with agony and pain.

"No! No, no, no, NO!" I shouted over and over. Persona ran over to me and grabbed me. His eyes were full of confusion, concern, and worry.

"Natsume, what happened? Why are you here? Wheres Mikan?!"

"She's gone." I choked out. "They took her...! It's- it's all my fault!"
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 13
NO! THEN NATSUME WILL KNOW MIKAN'S SECRET! YOU ARE A COMPLETE STALKER NATSUME HYUUGA!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 12
I am reading the 2 of the stories that you wrote!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 11
Aw!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 10
This is what surprised me:

'You are an emotionless weapon. You will do anything necessary to hide you identity and complete your mission. No emotion can be allowed, wether it be hate... or love.'

It's the last part of You're story!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 9
Wow!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 8
NO! PERSONA HAS PLANNED TO KILL MIKAN? I THOUGHT THEY WERE SIBLINGS AND I LIKE PERSONA'S CHARACTER NOW!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 6
...sHE THE SMELLED FLUFF PLUFF?
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 5
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 4
Finally she is staying at the acadamy!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 3
Ah! Oh! Yous hould try listening to "As I am" By Miley Cyrus!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 2
Oh!
JeZrA_Amutolover110
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
I love your other story!
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