O GOD! please you have to write MORE!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE THIS!

Gosh darn it I love Marshall. Good job smacking down Jinx, making them all see that the reason he was the best with Mary is because he spends the most time with Mary, so he knew that he could catch that bottle, he knew that there was no reason to be afraid of her. And then, he pulled out all the glass, and wow, tender even when he was mad, and i just really liked this. I'm sad that it's over, but I am glad that it was finally updated, I really enjoyed this.

please tell me you are going to write a sequel! Pretty please!!

I don't get it. I just re-watched the last 5 eps from Season 2 last night, including Ponzi scheme, and your take on Mary doesn't match any behavior I've seen in 2 seasons. It's like a completely different character.

So happy to see you updated, kinda sad it's over. I really enjoyed it and I liked the ending. Now you need to write a sequal so she can kick everyone out of her house ;)

Just found this story. Don't know how I missed it, but I wish you'd come back and finish it. Please!

come back! updated please!

I just read this story this evening and I really enjoyed it! Please update soon - I want to read more!

This is fantastic so far. Here's what I liked the most.

- Marshall catching the bottle and throwing it back at Mary while everyone else was hiding from her in the house. She needed that.

- Marshall pushing Mary into the pool. That was hilarious!

- Mary getting freaked out because Marshall wouldn't answer her. I imagine that Marshall ignoring her would be something that she would have trouble processing.

- Mary not realizing (or not caring) that she was standing in glass. I'm not sure which is better - not realizing or not caring.

Looking forward to more.

More please? i like this story (just read it again) and would love to know how it ends. Thanks

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Anyway, I am anxiously awaiting the second half of chapter three! Can't wait for more! Oh, what's Raph gonna do when he sees Mary in Marshall's arms, crying and bleeding?!?!

*falls into daydream*

MORE! ASAP!

I really loved this! update soon!

i am really enjoying this story, please update soon.

Great story! I'm excited to see how it progresses. I'm a big Marshall/Mary fan but I'm greedy and like to see them fight a little. Keep up the good work!

Oh. My God. This is amazing. I love to see Marshall's violent side, and you've done it perfectly. I love your Marshall. Evry single thing about this fic is terrible and horrifying and *lovely*.

Please update ASAP.