You write well, with a lot of emotional authenticity.

Sylaire. Bleh, creepy, but well written here. Having Monica in it was great too, plus the fading out into slash at the end. Poor, poor Sylar. He really does need help, doesn't he?

Inspired partly by Buffy? You totally ripped the whole thing off from Buffy.

Even though I would like Sylar to die a horrible death on the TV show, for all the bad stuff he's done (sorry!), I have to say that you have done a great job with portraying him as the victim. I feel as though you are the only writer in the world who could make me feel bad for Sylar, which makes you rather special and awesome.

...and about Claire, oh dear, what a poor, messed up kid she is. Poor, poor Claire...*comforts her*

As always, this was well written, I felt all of the emotions that you wanted me, as the reader to feel. Okay hun, back in your box now. (I'm sorry! I didn't mean that! Please take me back! *runs away from p h's fury*)

Whoo. Sylar and Claire creep me out times a hundred. *shudders* Very disturbing images, but very good writing. I liked it, though not the fan of Sylar/Claire scenarios. Still, good one.