 Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus 8/10/09 . chapter 1I've never read a "cute" Canaan story before, so this fic was refreshing. You managed to keep Canaan totally in character, while also bringing out his "friendlier" side. Having him meet a character like Alex was very fitting, since both Realians are polar opposites. Canaan is the aloof type, and Alex is like Canaan's fan/admirer. It was sweet to see Canaan warm to Alex' presence (which is a side we don't commonly see of Canaan). I also commend your ending: I liked the mystery. Is what Canaan and Alex shared "more" than friendship? Heh, either way, it's fun to leave the readers (and Canaan) guessing. Although I think this story has potential for a continuation, it's a solid one-shot by itself. Like I said, I've never read a "cute" Canaan fic before, but I'm glad to have read yours. Well done! |