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Reviews for: An Honest Smile
Lady Yami 9/6/09 . chapter 1
Ohh, cute read. Nice to see two seldom written about characters, especially together. It was very in character, too! Good job. :D
Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus 8/10/09 . chapter 1
I've never read a "cute" Canaan story before, so this fic was refreshing. You managed to keep Canaan totally in character, while also bringing out his "friendlier" side. Having him meet a character like Alex was very fitting, since both Realians are polar opposites. Canaan is the aloof type, and Alex is like Canaan's fan/admirer. It was sweet to see Canaan warm to Alex' presence (which is a side we don't commonly see of Canaan). I also commend your ending: I liked the mystery. Is what Canaan and Alex shared "more" than friendship? Heh, either way, it's fun to leave the readers (and Canaan) guessing. Although I think this story has potential for a continuation, it's a solid one-shot by itself. Like I said, I've never read a "cute" Canaan fic before, but I'm glad to have read yours. Well done!
Tylida Doradelo 8/7/09 . chapter 1
*SQUEAL*

Fluff. CX I loved it. Alex&Canaan forever and always now. I think you've given me a new favorite couple. C:

I really like this and I found it very smart the way you described their roles as realians and Alex's inferiority compared to Canaan's awesomeness. But see that just makes them go together even more! :0

Excellent job. CX
SyberiaWinx 8/7/09 . chapter 1
Great job. I can't wait for the sequel.D :
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