lol. I found it funny actually. The way he just killed Leissa. You should probably have made it a bit longer but its still good. An 8 out of 10. also ALL YOUR ASHFORD STORIES KICK ASS.

*applauds*

Good job. I enjoyed mostly al of this, for I am a vampire and RE fan. Other than that, I'm just plain nuts. Just kidding. Anyway, I loved how you described the vampiress and how Alexia was bitten. I'm going to be having nice dreams tonight. There is nothing wrong to my point of view in this story, but, I could be wrong. If you decide to review mine, don't be afraid to criticize me. RE:Unaffected was written when I was in grade 9. I'm still trying to get the sequel done. I must depart, I loved this story. Ciao.

ShadowAddi

u hav a sexi way of writing...it turns me on.

I think I love you...

Someone who's actually not afraid to show the obvious incest between them. I may seem sick for saying this, but Alfred/Alexia's such a good couple. X3

These are great! The whole sexy atmosphere surrounding alfred and alexia is just so amazing!

Another Ashford story? _ I didn't even know this existed! 4 chapters and you never contacted me. Wow. Sure, I'll beta! I'll also R&R!

Only one thing though-next time could you please contact me when you want me to beta for you? I almost never vist the "R" section, and until now I didn't even know this was here! Think of how much I've missed! .

What I saw looked good, and I will certainly be reading the rest later. Mesa tired now.

Shady Ashford ( a.k.a. Shady-Triple7 )

*pounces* Yay! It's-a been updated! *bounces about* Verry nice, I must say. Keep up the good work! *thumbs up*

Always a pleasure,

Yami

PLEZE A PART 3 PLEZE! i was so into th story...pleze MAKE PART 3!

Hmm...interesting. Havent seen this type of plot yet. Then again, I havent looked around at all the genres and such. Cant wait to read more, and please update as fast as you can. People get tired of waiting ya know. Yami

So lemme get this straight... the woman comes along and drinks from THEM before seeing HIM and coming back for him when he's older. Then HE kills HER and gives the gift to HER and- omigoddess this's confusing...

Dante

Yayy! I love these stories! They're so unqiue and you KNOW how mad I am for Alfred! He's so cute! - Please write some more things like this, I think it might be only us two that write about the Ashford's a lot.

Belle

xXx

creepy. Alfred seems like he wants Alexia in "another way". You style is very good though. I like it

I love all your stories, especially the ones about the Ashford Twins. You write so well! This one was very good, interesting storyline. Keep up the good work.

awesome1 alfreds sooo cute. he and thwat liessa girl should get coupled. continue

*Gets mid-way through the story*

Noo!

*grabs a wooden stake and waves it around madly while reading the rest*

Yay! Good Alfred!

*puts the stake away and grins*

Razz chan, I thought this was a great story.

Are you going to add any more to it?