 Amelia Bianca Black 8/11/09 . chapter 1Hey, I thought I'd leave a review. :)
So, what I liked:
The idea - I found it very original. It was such a nice way to stay true to the canon and to give us hope for Catherine and Warrick at the same time.
The ending - I don't think it came too abruptly. They saw how Lindsay and everyone from the team coped with Catherine's death, and then she decided it was high time to move on. It was a natural thing to do. No big words were used, and that's what made it so beautiful. We can see that they are moving on together and that they are closer than ever, but you didn't make it mushy. Well done!
Moreover, Cath's stubbornness and her concern for Lindsey were very in character. I also liked the fact that Warrick was thinking about Eli so much.
"Another thing the job taught me: Nothing is surprising when it comes to what a human being is capable of." - This is so true.
Keep up the good work! :) |