This is really good and I enjoyed reading it. Try to make events a little clearer perhaps, by describing things eg. surroundings, more clearly? Hope you write more soon?

Nice. :)

I absolutely loved it, and I can't express how perfect that ending was. Very nicely done.

Your Worshipfulness

Hmm, I wonder how Holmes made it appear as though he had no pulse? That sly dog... Anyway, loved the story, dahhling, and I hope to see more from you in the future!

Oh I'm so glad he's ok you had me worried for a while there. What a cool ending. Yay, I like her decision to stay and so, they live happily ever after! This is a great fic Angel and I hope your planning on writing more because I would love to read another one!

Great job, great ending. I really enjoyed this entire story, and I hope you write a sequel.

HOLMES, NOOO!

Sorry, you just got me all worked up. Not my fault!

Yay! I'm so glad to see another chapter!

awww that was mushy sweet. _

Aww, cute, they're getting married! Ooh, I can't wait to read the wedding part!

Yippie! Your up to chapter 6! This is wonderful J's Angel, I like it. You have a cool website too by the way. I think King was kinda neglecting Watson too but it wasn't that bad. Least I don't think so. I guess she wanted to concentrate on her character more. Heck, Actually, I think she neglected Holmes. I agree that Mary Russell was far too young to marry Holmes but oh well. *shrugs*

Bum bum bum duh! So, what happens next?

Interesting... which tells you nothing. Ok, I liked it a lot, but the whole pre-marital sex thing was something of a put off, at least for me. Otherwise, you have a great story going here, and I look forward to reading more.

Umm, PG-13, please. Otherwise, great job!