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Rubel
2009-12-12 . chapter 11
Neat ideas. I remember a few from Tff.
Darak
2009-09-01 . chapter 10
Hum, if Kakashi works like this the result will be that team 7 will never succeed through any mission, after all at that point in the manga he has barely any skills left (the guy got beaten by Zabuza in a few seconds) and Sasuke is too convinced of his own worth to put any real effort into training.

I predict that the first real mission of team 7 will result in the dead of Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura (Naruto has the needed regeneration to most likely survive)
Randoh
2009-08-29 . chapter 10
Hmm... I dont know if I like this chapter or not. I guess that would depend on what it is you were intending to do.
RockBane
2009-08-25 . chapter 11
Oh boy did Kakashi make a critical error in timing, eh?
grey mage
2009-08-25 . chapter 11
this on the other hand would have been awesome to read. too bad you had orochi implant the seals in their heads.
grey mage
2009-08-25 . chapter 10
i dont think i would enjoy this one too much. way too manipulative.
Adeptis
2009-08-24 . chapter 11
Good Story.
Innortal
2009-08-24 . chapter 11
LMAO, well done and nicely twisted.
wolf-in-hell
2009-08-24 . chapter 10
Now in this snippet, Kakashi really deserves to die. I can see it happening too. Naruto and Sakura, after a few weeks/months of this, realize what Kakashi is doing, and Naruto convinces her that this is not to help Sasuke, but just Kakashi being the lazy ** that he appears to be. They then go all out in training - hopfully roping in Hinata as well, cause she needs it, and eventually tear Kakashi limb from limb. And Naruto gets both girls. Oh, and that traitorus ** Sasuke gets his too.
Kell Shock
2009-08-24 . chapter 11
So Jiriaya, Kakashi, Gai, and Sarutobi versus Orochimaru, the Shodaime, the Nidaime, and the Yondaime...

Jiriaya may be as strong as a kage, but Kakashi and Gai aren't. Kakashi himself said he couldn't take on Orochimaru. And since Gai is generally regarded as Kakashi's rival but not superior, that makes it two kages and two jounin versus four kages. Unless Jiriaya pulls out Sage Mode, and unless Gai opens as many gates as he can, and unless Sarutobi brings out the Shinigami now, they're screwed.
iamnuff
2009-08-24 . chapter 11
"It didn't take long for her to recognise the creature as a Summon - and the brief terror at the unidentified monster was quickly replaced by the more precisely formed fears that she was trapped and alone against the Toad-Sannin... who from Orochimaru's occasional mention was some sort of depraved pervert."
you make him sound like a rapist.
awesome.
yeah, screw the rasangan, the fact that hes one of the most powerful nin in konoha,and the yondy's sensei.
Kell Shock
2009-08-14 . chapter 9
I don't recognize the show that you're crossing Buffy with.
Kell Shock
2009-08-14 . chapter 7
I was wondering what you were going to end this series of ideas with. I wasn't disappointed.

Although I think the one where Team 7 comes back from the future was pretty nice.
Kell Shock
2009-08-14 . chapter 4
Now this story fragment really has potential. Depending on which season of Sailormoon this is, Apollo could really help the Senshi out with whatever evil bad guy they're facing.
darkwoofe
2009-08-13 . chapter 3
Kasumi's House seems to be a winner. You should really continue this one if you can. I see so many possibilities for this story! And I can really get into Kasumi's, Ranma's and everyone else personalities. It's just an awesome concept and should go on if you're able to do so. Nice work!
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