 brakken 2009-12-29 . chapter 1I have to say, this is the best writing I've read in a while. You have a great grasp of Lelouch's psychology, and a better one for the way he viewed death and we view death and how those mix...Very well done indeed. The mixture of humor almost makes some of it all the more pathetic...and makes me empathize all the more. Interesting. I'll have to try that myself, though I doubt I'd pull it off so well. |
 RmfD 2009-10-19 . chapter 1oh, this was so incredibly sad and sweet and lovely. Very deep, very nice |
 Jaque Weasley 2009-09-28 . chapter 1I really like ur fic n.n
In fact, I'm a shirley's fan so... It really makes me sad her declaration of love... And Lelouch... Arght!
He is... He is... My idol, but sometimes I just want kick his head off ¬¬9
And is me, bein' insensible again... --'
Great fic o/
ja ne |
 Scars N Marks 2009-09-27 . chapter 1that was more than likely the most tacticful, intellegent, heartful fanfiction I've ever read. You have a truetalent for writig and I think the eating the dead thing fit well. I look forward to reading more of you fanfiction. |
 alto 2009-09-07 . chapter 1 good job!loved it. i wish the story had been longer though.i can only imagine how bothersome it is to eat the dead...hehe.good job on the characters too. |
 Cecilia Waters 2009-08-17 . chapter 1wow! This was great. It made me really sad, to imagine Lelouch hallucinating like that. Very touching story. |
 MithLuin 2009-08-14 . chapter 1Great story! I like the idea and execution, and agree that for all Lelouche's talk of steeling his heart and moving inexorably forward...he is quite haunted by the past. I also don't recall reading another story that dealt honestly with the emotional drain of planning one's own execution. Rolo might have had less screentime, but his distrust of Suzaku was perfect. The dead are more present to him than the living, here at the end - only Nunnally seems more connected to him, and even that is a farewell. |
 UndyingSpirit 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Indeed, this is an interesting read. I liked how you spanned from when he took the throne to when he died. Of course, his hallucinations are also comforting even if they serve to take away his (already lost) sanity. I do figure that Lelouch might have been through a lot more during his final two months before the end. Yes, I agree that Euphemia and Shirley are probably the two deaths he could never get over. They are still so kind to him, but they don't understand that what might not matter to them is considerably important to Lelouch. |
 Tr3adst0ne 2009-08-11 . chapter 1If only they had this in R2. This one shot is actually haunting. Coincides with the fact that C.C. herself was able to speak to Marianne so it makes sense for Lelouch to commune with those he shares an intimate familiarity with.
Keep 'em coming.
With regards,
Tr3adst0ne |
 Somebodylost 2009-08-10 . chapter 1My, you really like philosophical things, don't you? Cool and nice technique in applying that (philosophy) in your more emotional stories...
Awesentimental (awesome + sentimental) writing, Mr. YamiPaladinofChaos.
* But... another too-obvious-wrong-grammar-thingy: "tears running tracks down tears running tracks", spoken by Shirley.
* I really still need to read "How To Be A Romantic, Pirate Style" again, after reading two emotional fics of yours. Can't get that (pirate fic) off my head. And it totally provides as a breather from your sad or thought-provoking stories... |
 thepinkmartini 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Oh finally the review function is back up!
Anyways, this is definitely one of your best one shots yet. I love how you portrayed the different relationships Lelouch had with the people that he killed through the hallucinations. Clovis is a sweetie. I love how he speaks with flowery words. Though I'm not a big fan of Euphie or Shirley, I thoroughly enjoyed their parts with Lelouch and the kiss with Kallen! I'm glad you incorporated that in here! |
 WOWZAcoolBEANS 2009-08-09 . chapter 1This was extremely well-written and the concept was amazing and so perfect for Lelouch. Great job. :] |
 ShadowCell 2009-08-09 . chapter 1I gotta say, I love any Code Geass story that remembers that although Lelouch did evil things, Lelouch vi Britannia himself was more complicated and multidimensional than the evil things he did.
And I especially liked the idea of Clovis showing up make fun of him. |
 icarus923 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Oh wow. That was sad, makes me want to hug Lelouch. T_T
This was really, really good. |