Hmm. It looks like I should've read this one first before 'La Forza del Destino', but nonetheless it was still great. I personally think you should put together a short story of Anju and Kafei; I can already see the pieces being put together for it.

ack... anju doesn't seem like the intellectual time.

for one thing, she's very forgetful. she's also seems like a simple, subservient person, but also very very loyal. kinda like a dog...

i can see kafei being a brilliant person, being the son of a mayor and a probably influential mother. he might have been attracted to anju because of her honesty, kindness, or something else very wholesome. at least, that's how i see it.

i liked the chess thing going on in this story. kafei being attracted to anju because of the way she carries herself and the awesomeness of her chess playing skills was very interesting.

an enjoyable read. )

That was absolutely adorable! Even though I have no idea how to play chess, there's still something about it that's so cool. _

Anju and Kafei are adorable, seriously.

Thank you for writing such a great story! _

One of the best things I enjoy about this and other stories that you wrote based upon the Zelda/Majora universe is that they create an atmosphere where your readers can explore the worlds they love so much in a deeper way. You're very intelligent to write so well!

As for the romance, I appreciated the fact that you depicted it in a way that didn't appear overly mushy or dramatic. You kept it human. Your method of characterization is brilliant.

cool! can you please continue this I like it!

this is nice..very good. will you put the skullkid turning him into a kid in it before the wedding? i hope so...ah, drama...

Excellent all around-your writing is of a caliber seldom seen in these parts. Your experience and ease with writing really shows; causes your piece to stand out, especially to the reader who has spent the last few hours roaming these pages in frustration (and disgust). On a different note, Kafei and Anju are my favorite Zelda characters (they're the most intriguing!), and I don't think you could have picked a better way for them to meet and interact for the first time. You captured them both perfectly. Thank you for your writing.

You wrote this fic a while back, so I hope you're still reading reviews for it.

Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this was an excellent read! An eye candy; loved it lots! KafeiAnju is always so sweet, and I think the personalities you gave them were very fitting!

Thanks, by the way for your thoughts on "Vengeful Seduction." You have no idea how nervous I am about posting that particular fic. And just so you know, I didn't mean to make you feel , but I guess its pretty obvious you're older than I am. I was alive when the original games came out, but I was still perfectly content with my giant Big Bird doll at the time! So, I've only gotten to finish "Ocarina of Time" and "Majora's Mask!" Probably missing out then, aren't I?

You is gooood! Keep writing!

Oh. My. Nayru. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! Gaah! I've never seen anything written so beautifully in my LIFE! WAAAAAAH! That and kafei is one of my favorite characters in MM! *sigh* He's so kawaii. . . Ah well. Keep up the good work!

Breathtakingly beautiful and professionally written this is probably my all time favorite Kafei fic, or Zelda fic ever seeing as how the Dotour son is my all time favorite character. Keep up the good... no..no. Excellent work. If you EVER (EVER!) Write another fic the envolves Kafei agian PLEASE e-mail, I beseech you! Your free to e-mail me anyway, though, I'd love to talk.

*applaudes* Bravo, bravo! Your words flow like water in a stream over smoothed rocks. One of the few errors I found was a 'much' instead of 'must' when Kafei's mother was speaking to him at the end. I also really liked the way you placed Kafei and Anju as characters that hold their own character and dignity. On top of that, their both sharp as a blade in their own special ways. Very well done.

WOO! An Anju/Kafei story! GO ALEX!

Hey, haven't seen you around here lately! I think my husband would enjoy this story, since he's the chess freak. :)

Very good fic, as to be expected. Not many people have given Anju and Kafei personalities, and I like the ones you have. They seem very real, and Kafei's I think is very fitting. You don't get to know too much about Anju, but than neither does he. "end he game he was so enjoying" That was the only error I could find, if the he's really supposed to be a the. I think chess was a good game to use, a way to show Anju's equal to Kafei. Anyway, more writing!

Very well done. Everything about your stories is consistant and flowing. You grab a hold of your reader and keep their attention and interest. This has been a real page turner, and I am waiting in anticipation for Chapter 2. Please keep writing! I love all of your work!