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Reviews for: Experiment in Irritation
Blazichu
2010-01-01 . chapter 1
xD Nice; the mix of cute and comedy in tot stories never seems to get old.
The whole story was awesome; the details like Leo reading a book four times 'just in case' and Mike's observations (particularly "Wears Purple. Doesn’t like to be teased about it.") were spot-on, and added to the atmosphere.
Undoubtedly, Splinter's line in response to Mike's conclusion is my favorite: “You needed to do an experiment in order to learn this lesson?”

~Blazy
MilesTailsPrower-007
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
This sadly tempts me to go around and say, "I'm not touching you!" just to see how long it takes for people to crack. I won't, of course, since I'm not a five year old, but it sounds pathetically amusing anyway. 8|a;;

Anyway, I loved his notes, and I especially loved the contrast between reactions from his brothers. Raph having zero tolerance whatsoever while in a bad mood was so expected. Poor Mikey.

It's cute how he managed to get an idea like that out of the assignment he was given.
a-big-apple
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! How adorable! I love Donnie's science project, and his improvised chemistry set.
Pirates Sparrow and Turner
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
LOL Leave it to Mikey! And, of course, Raph's reaction was sheerly, perfectly Raph! :-) Thanks for sharing.
Reinbeauchaser
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Honestly, I thought the last bold-typed Conclusion was the end, but I am glad you didn't stop there. Kind of explained why Mike did this. Oh, very funny. I love it that Raphael didn't even waste a moment in bapping his little brother, either. I half expected it, in fact.

Leave it to Mike to be more creative with his assignments!

Great job, Cyn!

And, just in case you have problems getting this review, too, I'm going to copy paste it to your Facebook account. :0)
Ramica
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
LOL only Mike would take a lesson in observation and turn it into a way to irritate his brothers.

Love raph's response to Mike. Very cute and enjoyable.
BubblyShell22
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Cyn, your story is up here now. I guess everything got fixed. That's a relief 'cause now I can post my story tomorrow if I get it done. And this story was awesome, as your stories always are.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Scribe of Turesa
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
LOL! Hahahaha!! I loved it it was so funny...the poor guys...and Mikey...Raph probably hit him pretty hard...
AKA
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
AW!
Cynlee
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
No, I'm not vain. I'm just checking this system.
yaoigirl22
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
This soounds like something Mikey would do.

Very funny I was laughing throughout the whole thing
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