 fluting-through-life 2009-11-30 . chapter 1This was the funniest thing that I've read in a very... very long time. Man, I can't even TELL you what I thought was the funniest part. I definitely had to lol at Ratchet's codename being "Redrum." He probably picked that himself. And the addendum in the first transmission where Prime's like, "I will kill you next time I see you." I DIED at that part. The transmissions were absolutely my favorite parts. Poor Sideswipe. He had no idea what he was supposed to do. lol |
 anonymous 2009-11-13 . chapter 1 I have no words for how much awesome you've managed to pack into this story, and no words for how much I love it. I can only simply say, with utmost sincerity and appreciation: Thank You. |
 Artemis1000 2009-11-11 . chapter 1This is such an awesome story and really cheered me up after a bad afternoon :) |
 Savcat 2009-11-02 . chapter 1That made my day.
I do admit, that at some point's i had gotten confused, I think that I was just to busy laughing that I missed some of it.
It was really good and something different. |
 Cassiopeia1979 2009-10-28 . chapter 1i almost peed myself laughing MULTIPLE times during this fic... the chicken kick, 'noted', Primes use of many 'bleeps'.. i could go on... you are by far my favorite Tf writer, and made me actually like the twins. Kudos! |
 Zak's-blood13 2009-10-25 . chapter 1That was fun. |
 Bluebird Soaring 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Siders is brilliant! As is this story in general of course, but starting the day by stabbing Prime in the back and then using the same tactic to take out Megs is brilliant =) I love their knife tossing game (such a twins sort of thing to do) and their interactions with the other Autobots is such a riot! |
 Lady Dragon2 2009-09-11 . chapter 1You have such talent. I've had the alert sitting so long in my inbox I forgot about it till tonight as I try to clean it out. I know people SAY they LOL'd, but I seriously did at so many different points in this fic.
I don't have anything else coherent to say. But great job, yet again. I love all your fics, and this one is going right into the favorites as well.
Much Love!
LD/abby |
 Blume 2009-08-31 . chapter 1UR BACK!
*goes to thank the thanks the saints, and ligth yet another candle as thank you*
...well no, not really. I reserve lightning candles only for passign exams.
...I'd have done an exception for you, though.
But there you go. It appears inspiration is stronger than any belief ;P
I LOVED it. from the tittle to the ironic sentences here and there to the 'oh, I bet Primus is laughing at us right now' ending thet the Decepticons got in the end! I also loved tha tyou added Swoop as a medic: I liked the idea ever sine I read 'vigil' too ^__^!
here's another thing I liked: that fact that it looks like, chronologicaly speaking, there has been some time since your other works and this one; Sunny is moody, but people stand to be around him longer, and he is more paitent in return... even Swoop seems to like him...to an extent.. XD
so yeah, glad you still have some plot bunnies bitting your ankles and that you're kind enough to listen to them and show us! |
 Uniasus 2009-08-31 . chapter 1This was hilarious, I absolutely love it. I was hoping to see Sunny have a larger part, but Sides was perfect. And having the dinobots gang up on Rachet was amazing. |
 Shini 2009-08-31 . chapter 1 FUNNIEST
FIC
EVER
that is all |
 Imbri of the Moon 2009-08-29 . chapter 1Aw man, I can't even think of how to word this review considering my sides hurt from it all. X3 The best part had to be Optimus' 'kickin chickens' tho, I'll have that in my head for a long time. Loved you fic! |
 KillforKlondike 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Oh wow. You have no idea how hard I'm laughing. I love Side's new nickname too. Definitely an interesting new job option. |
 zomgitsalaura 2009-08-27 . chapter 1*snerk*
kicking chicken
this story is going to have me smiling for hours ^_^ |
 Aqua-Girl555 2009-08-23 . chapter 1LOL LOL! I'm trying not to wake anybody with my giggles. Backstabing bastured... ROGLMAO! LOL! This was just too funny. HE stabed prim in the back! Then stabed MEgatron in the back! He sure likes to stab leaders in the back! |