YOu really have a way with Poetry!

Great JOB!

Love to see more!

Kawaii! (claps her hands together) This is SERIOUSLY good song material, or at least poem material! That's a real sweet one, you're a great writer! Maybe you can write a 'reply' story for this one. 'When you rejoin society..' (suddenly hits herself) Baka, don't tell people what to write, they know very well what they want to write! Sorry about that. Anyway, great stuff!

Good job! I also think that Zelgadis is talking about Amelia, especially with the descriptions that you used. Poor Zelgadis, doesn't he know he can be a part of society even though he is different?

*snif snif* aww... Poor Zel! *sniffle* poor guy's had enough bad luck... I hope he finds he cure so he can be with whoever it is he's talking about *crawls off into a corner to cry* Poor guy! This is a really sweet poem, I love it! *blows nose*

Aww... what a pretty poem...