Cool story. You should continue it.

Is this a one shot or will you continue the story with palpatine trying to raise Luke to the Dark side of the Force?

INteresting indeed. Cant wait to see how this goes

holy mushrooms! How's the Force going to get in Balance now? what is to beacome of luke? I am very interested in this and happy to be the first reveiwer. :) this is a grest start and I hope to see more soon!

Oh yes, this story is good. I actually enjoyed it.

Problems though. Develop paragraphs - i would suggest that you read a few large star wars fics because posting just one liners gets very tedious at times. Paragraphs should be long, but not too long, say hundred-odd words.

What is really good is the twist that you performed: Anakin's/Vader's death and Luke being given to Palpatine, with Obi-wan running away. Great idea.