 OrionTheHunter 2010-01-06 . chapter 24Thank you for the update. Happy New Year. |
 kahless21 2010-01-04 . chapter 24the ultimate form of cowardice. the government was afraid so they destroyed what could ultimately save so many lives. just to keep it out of the hands of their enemy and allies alike. |
 john777 2010-01-04 . chapter 24Good story, keep writing |
 WhiteElfElder 2010-01-04 . chapter 24Oh yeah, not only is Daniel upset over the loss of knowledge, but he feels that he let down whomever left it there to be found and used by later generations. He really has a martyr complex. I would not want to be anyhwere near the Tok'ra when they find out the truth of things. And especially them knowing that the Tau'ri have the weapon and control mechanism. That is going to set some hearts racing in fear regardless if it is voiced. |
 WhiteElfElder 2010-01-04 . chapter 23You know, it seems Daniel has a propensity for setting the women around him off on crusades to straighten out his attitudes and behaviors. The boy just does not learn. This was a good chapter in dealing with a traitor. |
 J.Stone 2010-01-04 . chapter 24Update soon please. |
 hordac85 2009-12-28 . chapter 16Excellent.Wonderful work. |
 Dr. Sweetz 2009-12-27 . chapter 23this is a good story. update soon! |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 13Excellent. |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 10Excellent.Keep it up.great work |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 9Excellent.Keep it up.. |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 8Excellent.Keep it up |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 7Excellent.Keep it up. |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 5Nice chapter.keep it up. |
 hordac85 2009-12-27 . chapter 3Nice chapter. |