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OrionTheHunter
2010-01-06 . chapter 24
Thank you for the update. Happy New Year.
kahless21
2010-01-04 . chapter 24
the ultimate form of cowardice. the government was afraid so they destroyed what could ultimately save so many lives. just to keep it out of the hands of their enemy and allies alike.
john777
2010-01-04 . chapter 24
Good story, keep writing
WhiteElfElder
2010-01-04 . chapter 24
Oh yeah, not only is Daniel upset over the loss of knowledge, but he feels that he let down whomever left it there to be found and used by later generations. He really has a martyr complex. I would not want to be anyhwere near the Tok'ra when they find out the truth of things. And especially them knowing that the Tau'ri have the weapon and control mechanism. That is going to set some hearts racing in fear regardless if it is voiced.
WhiteElfElder
2010-01-04 . chapter 23
You know, it seems Daniel has a propensity for setting the women around him off on crusades to straighten out his attitudes and behaviors. The boy just does not learn. This was a good chapter in dealing with a traitor.
J.Stone
2010-01-04 . chapter 24
Update soon please.
hordac85
2009-12-28 . chapter 16
Excellent.Wonderful work.
Dr. Sweetz
2009-12-27 . chapter 23
this is a good story. update soon!
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 13
Excellent.
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 10
Excellent.Keep it up.great work
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 9
Excellent.Keep it up..
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 8
Excellent.Keep it up
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 7
Excellent.Keep it up.
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 5
Nice chapter.keep it up.
hordac85
2009-12-27 . chapter 3
Nice chapter.
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