Wow, that was really good. Thank you. It was really sweet in its imperfection (of the relationship, not your writing!). I enjoyed how descriptive and gentle it was.

Aww! They are so sweet together! I love them!

Aww, really cute. You kept them in character incredibly well, it made it seem all the more real. I'd love to see you write more of this pairing, as it needs more attention!

Awesome job

Looking forward to more

Aww, well ain't that just fluffy. ;)

Thanks for the update

I look forward to see where it goes

It will be interesting to see where you take this story