 xXFoxy Scorpion BlossomXx 2009-11-22 . chapter 7OMG! THIS IS ONE OF THE AWESOMEST FICS EVER! I LOVE IT! AS THEY SAY ALLS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR! I LOVE THIS IT IS THE BEST! SO PLEZ UPDATE SOON!1 |
 im-mute-coz-u-nvr-care. 2009-11-15 . chapter 7haha cant get enough of it ur a really good writer update soon ily no ** if ur a girl. |
 Lieah 2009-11-11 . chapter 7 love this story! >.< Update plz! |
 Jhallel 2009-10-27 . chapter 4I am really loving this story. as usual, i find your characterizations excellent. The only thing thats throwing me off is how you use your terms for right and left. Im a little dyslexic, id find it much easier if you just said, "his hand" instead of, "his left hand" etc.. It throws me off for a beat as i try to re imagine the setting. lol
but i really love this story. keep it up! |
 susannajulia 2009-10-25 . chapter 7One of the reasons I like your fics so much is, that they end happily. I hope this one does too... |
 Kitten2 2009-10-21 . chapter 7To be honest, i like this take on both of them, can't wait to see more |
 zackaroni 2009-10-06 . chapter 7No... Stay Sakura!!
Haha I like the fact that Sakura's independent rather than the little girl she's usually portrayed as in other fics.
Amazing job, as usual! |
 Tara Alexa 2009-10-03 . chapter 7 Very interesting. I like independent Sakura, and it will be interesting to see what lengths Gaara will go to keep her with him. I can't wait to read more! |
 Kinky-Nami-Lass 2009-10-03 . chapter 7Wow! Haven't been online in a while, and was greatly surprised by how much you've updated!
Thanks for the chapters! They were great! You spoil us, really!
Do it again lol! |
 Nyanonymous 2009-10-03 . chapter 7aw, i'm sorry about school. but i am glad that you're going to finish this, whether it's as long as you hoped or not, your grades are most important. you can't make money writing fan fiction. it's so sad.
well i like this very much, i like that you're making sakura leave, i would suggest that she go to temari this same day, while gaara's on the front lines and say, since he's out there, and since the enemy forces are retreating, it's probably safest not while they're distracted for me and my team to slip out and then we maybe can even get to hinata before the baby comes!
then they'd pack up and leave, temari would send a messenger to gaara to meet him before he entered the city, and have gaara come see her, then she'd tell him the circumstances. that's just a quicky way to get sakura out of there. hope anything helps :)
chow |
 KT 2009-10-02 . chapter 7 Ah, here comes the drama! It's interesting to see how this story unfolds. Great job with this~
PS: Good luck with school :] |
 Socially Suicidal 2009-10-01 . chapter 7I'm thinking the next chapter title will be something like "Homicidal Redhead Throws a B*tch Fit at the Leaving of his Lover"
It'd be a pretty good summary.
Haha, can't wait till next update.. a.k.a World War Three Confined to a Hut. |
 Sora Inu-chan 2009-09-30 . chapter 7Ah, I actually really enjoyed this chapter XD, the complication of the couple is a very solid and believable. I'm sorry to hear that you're shortening the story =-= but I TOTALLY understand XP
Anyway, I can't wait to read the rest of the story, and just so you know I busy myself with rereading your older stuff since, wel XD Ahaha, its super amazing too :3
Good luck with school XD |
 BlueSkyHeaven 2009-09-30 . chapter 7well... when the title is 'caught and set loose' I can almost predict the outcome of the relationship but it doesn't stop me feeling anxious to know what happens next! Can't wait for more! |
 blissful trinity 2009-09-30 . chapter 7This is a very awesome chapter... I bet when she does get a chance to leave, Gaara is still going to find her and bring her back...hmm I wonder what the compromise will be... Good luck! |