 cherrykool 8/20/05 . chapter 6 What do you mean you don't think Sirius is out of character? He's completely out of character, he would never rape anyone. And he certainly wouldn't flee from the scene of the crime like a coward, I think tracking down Pettigrew proves that. And I think the Whomping Willow thing was just a joke he played on Snape, I really don't think he actually meant to kill him. Also, he's one of the smartest students in the school, do you really think he'd be stupid enought to use Avada Kedavra on a fellow student like you made him do? |
 Joan 7/11/02 . chapter 6 ARGH! I hate clifhangers -_-. OK i'm back to review some more and i have one thing to say, THIS IS BLOODY BRILLIANT! I love this story and wish you to continue in a hurry if you don't mind. I'll be back to check to see if you've updated. Joan _ |
 Serb 5/25/02 . chapter 5 Wow, you think like me! I don't like James Potter,
Peter Pettigrew and ESPECIALLY I hate Sirus Black.
He was always so damn arrogant.
Keep writing! |
 Joan 5/24/02 . chapter 5 Hi I'm back and FINALLY there is an update I've been waiting for months. I don't think Sirius tried to kill Snape on perpose he probly tried to scare him but we won't know his intentions untill Rowling tells us but good job so far I like how you made Fiona turn evil you don't ever see that in a writer very often. Keep up the good work and update soon REALLY soon. _ |
 Joan 4/23/02 . chapter 4 Alright I've had enough. I've been waiting for almost two months this rediculass I want to know what will happen to Fiona is she going to die or not. I have been very pationt up till now but I'VE HAD ENOUGH! Oh pleaes update this I've been waiting for who knows how long and I'm going crazy. Please update this story I'm begging you please. |
 psychopath521 3/26/02 . chapter 4Listen... That does NOT sound like the Sirius Black all of us know and love. And I must agree that this does resemble a Mary Sue. I would encourage you to rewrite this; get rid of the Mary Sue-ism and keep the people in character.
Thank you for your time. |
 Oh hello sunshine 2/22/02 . chapter 4*round of applause* |
 Joan 2/21/02 . chapter 4 FINALLY! I have been waiting so long for this I like this chapter but that dose not sound like the Sirius we know and I don't think he would use a instant Death curse well keep wrighting I can't wait to find out what happens and don't kill any one I hate it when that happens. _ |
 Joan 2/12/02 . chapter 3 Please up date already I've been waiting for so long, ok so it's only been 13 days but that is too long in my book so UPDATE ALREADY PLEASE I'M GOING CRAZY (peals herself off the celing)please please please please please please please please please please please please please please up date soon like NOW I don't know how much more I can take I hate waiting in suspence UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE thank you. _ |
 kandy-chan 2/11/02 . chapter 3 ahem, I'm WAITING! |
 Oh hello sunshine 2/7/02 . chapter 3How DARE you not post chapter four! Shame on you! Oh yeah, and you're going into my favorites and there's nothing you can do to stop me so NYAH. |
 Joan 2/3/02 . chapter 3 Love your story update soon, this is by far my fav fanfic. |
 Leila C. Snape 1/31/02 . chapter 3Wow...Weird, but cool! Hehe...I love Snape fics...Write them myself! Continue, please!
Leila |
 Joan 1/19/02 . chapter 2 Oh please wright the next chapter already I'm dying of excitment. |
 littlecatblack 1/14/02 . chapter 2 i beg you to do two things...
one:this story's great! next chapter come on! _
and two: please please please give quirrell his real first name! no one ever does that and it drives me crazy! It's SLATERO you people, come on! |