 samjam8088 3/5/11 . chapter 3ElfMaidenOfLight,
I have only just discovered your solo act of writing awesomeness, and I have to say I'm completely addicted. I have a thing for Draco, and this story is executed beautifully; Hermione and Draco stay in character throughout, and Draco's humanity is explored without making him into a complete mush pie. I can't wait for the next chapter (I desperately hope there will be one)... this is the best HP fanfic I've read in quite a while, and, in my opinion, all of your fiction is fantastic. However, I suspect you might want some actual advice beyond a "good job" in a review, so... in case you want any suggestions, mine is that you could maybe show a few of Ron's better qualities. He can still be a generally dumb and shallow guy, but I think it might be more realistic if he were also allowed to have a few good qualities, some nice things he does, as Hermione's best friend.
However, that's just my opinion, and I can't know what you have planned so I could be completely wrong.
Anyway, I hope you keep writing, as I've enjoyed the heck out of your work!
Thanks for sharing it with us.
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