That was pretty funny. You should continue..I loved the thing where they kept calling her sir. Made me chuckle. Nice job

i would really like to see you update this as a story not many clerk fics as im sure someone already stated plus i would like to see where this goes

You should really continue this. There's never any good Clerks fanfics, and this one looks like it has the right stuff to go a long way. By the way, I totally enjoy your Sons of Anarchy stories!

Really good so far, I like it alot, if you ever feel like continuing definitely go for it!

That was a pretty cool chapter.

It would be really awesome if you updated, but if you don't I will just have to find some way to live on. *Grins*

I'm likin' this, kinda wondering where it's going. But it's amusing so far.

I really do hope you contiue this :) I like it :D

I love clerks and original characters, so this is a win win!

(God I sound like a fanboy...)