What a fresh concept for telling this kind of story. I like the POV since it adds a new dimension to the characters. Nice job!

Love the twist, that Naomi is talking to Miral Paris. Thanks for posting.

A very nice follow up and background on Naomi's "get well" card! Really enjoyed the interaction between B'Elanna and Naomi outside sickbay...that would have made one hell of scene in that episode. That sickbay scene in the series was about the "only" decent thing that came out of that one. Your additional background story sure improved on what was provided by the series...for that I am very appreciative! Well done!;)

Aw.

A nice cute little interlude. Thanks for sharing!