great chapter. i luved the final destination. it was an awesome movie. anyways update soon.

Love your story! It is so cool! I like the way you added the other characters of the other movies together, it is really good!
Please continue I really love it.
See ya'
Kisses

That was an excellent third chapter. Why did you have to ruin Alex, Clear, Kim, and Burke in my eyes?
Totally saw Bludworth coming :P No, actually, I thought it was Carter.
I can't wait for the fourth chapter. This will totally be interesting!

Woo! I em loving it!! Don't worry about spoiling it, I've already seen the film anyway. I actually can't wait for the next chapter, - and I'm not just saying that - so get writing ^^

I love how all of this played out, especially how you even included the fourth film. Thats very clever and different, I'm very excited to see what happens next. I liked all of the flashbacks.

that part where alex says 'n the flesh' was funny. i saw the final destination. it was really good. i like the flashbacks. great chapter. update soon.

cant wait til ur update...or the final destination.

Oh my, I can't believe it was clear Rivers, she's a ** any way.

And you aren't posting for like ages, oh no!

Great chapter, can't wait to read more... when you do update.

Haha lol. It's not bad as a continuation to where the movie left off. My personal opinion is that it was rather weird to portray Death so evidently in this story, since Death was never really depicted in any of the movies as something tangible. I think keeping Death as just a mysterious force might have worked better as there is the thrill of the unknown factor. But I liked the story still!

I liked this, my heart was actually racing at times, because I didn't know what was happening.

I like this and I like how death can just jump into some one's body.

Hope you update soon.

I really, really like this! It's somewhat different, and it's good to see that around here. I would love for you to continue, I want to read more!