I liked it. It was really good.

very nice

Wow...that was really beautiful.

Lovely. Heartbreaking but wonderful. Don't we all want a love like that?

Aw, this is very sweet! It isn't cliche. I really enjoyed it. You could tell a story of the life that Harry and Severus spent together in a one-way dialogue, and that is quite difficult in my opinion. Great job!:)

OMG! Beautiful story! Thank you

Hi there, I can only say: So wonderful! I think it's the opposite of cliched and that's one of the reasons I like it so much. Your style of writing fitted perfectly to the atmosphere you wanted to ewoke and the aspects of Harry's and Severus' relationship you have chosen are nice.
Your Melfis.