ooh! Potential love!

good

sigh, so good!

poor ned. i never really liked him much, especially not more than Frank or Joe

A great story. Very good.

Very well written and impressive! Definitely an awesome story! You took the game and reworked it into soemething amazing. Keep up the good work!

Good job with the story :) I only wish that Nancy and Ned were together... :( but it was a good story overall. I only have one question. If Nancy and Ned were broken up, which they are in this story, why would Nancy ask Ned to do the favor of taking her to the airport? I know it's just fanfiction and I shouldn't take it so literally, but it just stood out to me, ya know? lol sorry I'm babbling. I do that a lot. Anyway, I hope you write another story soon...possibly with Nancy and Ned?...

-boyzaremylife