Absolutely fantastic story! truly, so amazingly satisfying. One of thoese few stories where you truly have a beginning, middle and end. with a decent plot line and nicely written detail and description. You have managed to make the chapters end at good points and weave suspense and humor together perfectly! You are a wonderful author! please try your hand at another story about Alex now! i am going to check out the rest of your stories now!!

i got crocodile tears 4 my bday. its awesome bt cos i like this story so much i wont tel u how it ends lol!

well done! that was such an amazing story! i really really loved it. are you thinking about doing another sort of thing about like point blank? or a one-shot if alex decides to call wolf? that would be interesting. i can't wait to read more of your work, you're a fantastic author!

Nice story you've made here!:D
Haven't bought Crocodile tears yet... Still doubting on buying the english one, or waiting for the Dutch translation...
I hope to be able to read a lot more from you!:)

great finish!
will definitely be keeping an eye out for more stories!

very good. nice ending. also i got crocodile tears TODAY! well from my library but same thing kinda. Hehe XD great ending...any sequels or one-shots in the future *hinthintnudgenugde*

Wonderful chapter, and wonderful story overall. ^^ Thank you for writig this, it was a pleasure to read. ^^ And yeah, I think you make a mistake with the name. I think they have referred to him as Alex in earlier chapters. You might want to fix that, by either omitting it earlier, or in this chapter.

WOT!! yay, it's finished!! I mean, I'm sorry it's done but still... closure, you know? a sense of satisfaction. excellent work! --FoxGlade

The final chapter *tear* I've really enjoyed this story, especially the appearance of Yassen. Is there any chance of a sequel?

poor alex

This was wonderful! The small problem with the name is easily fixed - just look at the word documents and search for the word "Alex". I'm obscenely sad to see this series end, despite the nice ending and the new chapter. Would you ever consider doing a follow-up to this based on a closer relationship with the unit? Thank you so much for posting this up here and writing this story so quickly. Happy Thanksgiving!

Seriously, I did NOT know that Crocodile Tears was already out. I'll go buy it later. This story was amazing and you've done a great job at it!

Wow, a *finished* AR multichapter story. They're pretty rare- congratulations! Thanks again for writing! Is there any chance that your next project would be a follow-up Point Blank oneshot? I'd love to read it. And crocodile tears was awesome (hooray for a good public library system), so you can look forward to that. Happy thanksgiving!

You finished it!! Happy turkey day, even though I don't eat turkey . . :)
I have CT - its cool, but its not AS GOOD as the other books. I won't give naything away but you deffo have to read it yourself!!
Tots xx

This was an amazing story! I can't believe it's already over! I wish it could go on an on. I enjoyed reading this so thanks for writing it! And good luck on future stories!